Tuesday, October 26, 2010

Linear Essay Critiques

Sorry this is so late guys kinda swamped with midterms and hw.
Charlotte- Ummm yea the only thing i have to say is don't change it cause its really good. Everyone should remember to redo the format of your essay so that its black and white and the text is in 100% instead of pixels so it fits the screen for teach.
Max- I liked your essay because of the smooth transitions and detail. However I think you should make the font a little bigger cause its hard to read.
Mike- Yeah... Just change it to white and black and make it 100% instead of pixels. Its very detailed and its quite obvious you spent alotta time on this. Well done.

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