Remix Revision

For my remix revision, I decided to just touch up and add a few details to my original remix. I made the font more read-able, and also tried to make the script a little better. I changed the script by making it seem more believable as well as more in character from what Cory envisioned. I also edited the actual people and backgrounds, making better angles and views of the background and also better expressions from the characters in my opinion. Overall it was a smaller revision, but one that was needed. It definitely helps my remix and has made it into an overall better piece of work.